My life

I’m posting this piece of writing because I think I worked hard on my word choice .

My life is flashing before my eyes, but why me? What did I do to deserve such a life?! I can see the fear of dying through my brothers eyes. The only thing that I wish for in this wild world is to have a good education and be safe. My life is a mess that’s get messier every day. I risk my life going to school in these cold waters that no one can survive in! But there is that one thing that I wonder every single day, would education be worth all these risks?

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4 thoughts on “My life

  1. Dear Maedeh,
    I enjoyed the whole story.I loved the start and ending the most because at the start I liked how you said my life flashes before my eyes and at the end, I loved how you asked a question.
    from Lani

  2. Dear Maedeh,

    I love how you put descriptive words in your life story and how you put a question and the end of it. I hope to hear back from you.

    From Moeni.

  3. Dear Maedeh,

    I love the story you wrote. It is adorably awesome. I really like the start. It was really good. I also liked how you put a really good question at the end of your story. Your story really hooked me in. GOOD JOB!

    From Talwinder:)

  4. Dear Maedeh,
    This snapshot is really great. I love all the conventions you used. What made you pick this picture prompt?
    Well done Maedeh. This snapshot is really cool.
    From Chloe (6K)

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